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Jurge Moose Chicken Joined: 10 Dec 2007 Posts: 430 Location: Leaf VillageCharacter Jurge Rank: 1 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 45636 Points
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:40 am Post subject:
blue wrote: well, I've gotten the lantern done and finished the wood for the roof. Its taking a while because I'm not working on it very often and also I'm trying to make the parts of it reusable.. (like the lantern, roof, walls, etc)
ahh thats a good idea.
should save some time.
recon you can uplaod an update i'm dying to see.
Obviously not actually dying that would be stupid..
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blue Evil Admin Joined: 13 Sep 2007 Posts: 255 2014 Points
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:36 am Post subject:
Alright:
Feedback's appreciated.
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Beirgo Joined: 01 Nov 2007 Posts: 174 Location: Des Moines IACharacter Mr.Twinkie Rank: 5 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Holy Alignment: Neutral 527 Points
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:06 am Post subject:
color is too washed out and the roof is disproportional. but besides that its designed and drawn well.
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Jurge Moose Chicken Joined: 10 Dec 2007 Posts: 430 Location: Leaf VillageCharacter Jurge Rank: 1 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 45636 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:10 am Post subject:
Yeh i agree the colour of the building is to pale.
But it's only the latern and the wood that is finished and in my opinion that is sweet.
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cody4camp Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 396 Location: computer chairCharacter Kankarru Rank: 10 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Fighter Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 438 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:40 am Post subject:
shade the roof
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Jurge Moose Chicken Joined: 10 Dec 2007 Posts: 430 Location: Leaf VillageCharacter Jurge Rank: 1 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 45636 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:49 am Post subject:
Sprites don't normally use that much shading :/
I think the roof is fine, don't over do it.
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cody4camp Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 396 Location: computer chairCharacter Kankarru Rank: 10 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Fighter Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 438 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:11 am Post subject:
atleast nmake it look real, hope this aint offensive but it looks outlandish with a big yellow square, not that i could do any better....
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Jurge Moose Chicken Joined: 10 Dec 2007 Posts: 430 Location: Leaf VillageCharacter Jurge Rank: 1 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 45636 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:22 am Post subject:
Plus it is a flat surface so it shouldn't be shaded.
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cody4camp Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 396 Location: computer chairCharacter Kankarru Rank: 10 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Fighter Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 438 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:24 am Post subject:
i understand it is not finished yet... cuz the west side of the awning isnt colored in
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Oni Joined: 02 Sep 2007 Posts: 664Character Oni Rank: 3 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Thief Element: Earth Alignment: Neutral 3146 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:27 am Post subject:
cody4camp wrote: atleast nmake it look real, hope this aint offensive but it looks outlandish with a big yellow square, not that i could do any better....
It's not finished...
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cody4camp Joined: 02 Jan 2008 Posts: 396 Location: computer chairCharacter Kankarru Rank: 10 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Fighter Element: Fire Alignment: Neutral 438 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:35 am Post subject:
cody4camp wrote: i understand it is not finished yet... cuz the west side of the awning isnt colored in
i wrote about dat
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Oni Joined: 02 Sep 2007 Posts: 664Character Oni Rank: 3 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Thief Element: Earth Alignment: Neutral 3146 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:44 am Post subject:
I didn't see that, you made that just before I made my post. Sorry about that.
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tinnie Joined: 01 Oct 2007 Posts: 249 Location: U.KCharacter tinnie Rank: 2 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Barbare Element: Earth Alignment: Neutral 4 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:01 pm Post subject:
blue could u send it to me? so i could use my skills to see how i vouch against u
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Beirgo Joined: 01 Nov 2007 Posts: 174 Location: Des Moines IACharacter Mr.Twinkie Rank: 5 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Holy Alignment: Neutral 527 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:27 pm Post subject:
you also need a version with the gate closed.
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Sim Site Admin Joined: 02 Sep 2007 Posts: 386 Location: baltimoreCharacter Psychotomus Rank: 47 of 131 Level: 1 Characteristics: Class: Bard Element: Water Alignment: Neutral 7786 Points
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:47 pm Post subject:
Beirgo wrote: you also need a version with the gate closed.
No, just the gate, we can just render it in front of t he shop =)
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