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Building Dev: Ramen Shop
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Jurge
Moose Chicken


Joined: 10 Dec 2007
Posts: 430
Location: Leaf Village

Character Jurge
  Rank: 1 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

45636 Points

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

blue wrote:
well, I've gotten the lantern done and finished the wood for the roof. Its taking a while because I'm not working on it very often and also I'm trying to make the parts of it reusable.. (like the lantern, roof, walls, etc)


ahh thats a good idea.
should save some time.
recon you can uplaod an update i'm dying to see.
Obviously not actually dying that would be stupid..
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blue
Evil Admin


Joined: 13 Sep 2007
Posts: 255



2014 Points

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright:



Feedback's appreciated.
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Beirgo



Joined: 01 Nov 2007
Posts: 174
Location: Des Moines IA

Character Mr.Twinkie
  Rank: 5 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Holy
  Alignment:  Neutral

527 Points

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

color is too washed out and the roof is disproportional. but besides that its designed and drawn well. Very Happy
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Jurge
Moose Chicken


Joined: 10 Dec 2007
Posts: 430
Location: Leaf Village

Character Jurge
  Rank: 1 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

45636 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeh i agree the colour of the building is to pale.
But it's only the latern and the wood that is finished and in my opinion that is sweet.
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cody4camp



Joined: 02 Jan 2008
Posts: 396
Location: computer chair

Character Kankarru
  Rank: 10 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Fighter
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

438 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

shade the roof
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Jurge
Moose Chicken


Joined: 10 Dec 2007
Posts: 430
Location: Leaf Village

Character Jurge
  Rank: 1 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

45636 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sprites don't normally use that much shading :/
I think the roof is fine, don't over do it.
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cody4camp



Joined: 02 Jan 2008
Posts: 396
Location: computer chair

Character Kankarru
  Rank: 10 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Fighter
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

438 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

atleast nmake it look real, hope this aint offensive but it looks outlandish with a big yellow square, not that i could do any better....
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Jurge
Moose Chicken


Joined: 10 Dec 2007
Posts: 430
Location: Leaf Village

Character Jurge
  Rank: 1 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

45636 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Plus it is a flat surface so it shouldn't be shaded.
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cody4camp



Joined: 02 Jan 2008
Posts: 396
Location: computer chair

Character Kankarru
  Rank: 10 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Fighter
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

438 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i understand it is not finished yet... cuz the west side of the awning isnt colored in
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Oni



Joined: 02 Sep 2007
Posts: 664


Character Oni
  Rank: 3 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Thief
  Element:  Earth
  Alignment:  Neutral

3146 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

cody4camp wrote:
atleast nmake it look real, hope this aint offensive but it looks outlandish with a big yellow square, not that i could do any better....


It's not finished...
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cody4camp



Joined: 02 Jan 2008
Posts: 396
Location: computer chair

Character Kankarru
  Rank: 10 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Fighter
  Element:  Fire
  Alignment:  Neutral

438 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

cody4camp wrote:
i understand it is not finished yet... cuz the west side of the awning isnt colored in


i wrote about dat
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Oni



Joined: 02 Sep 2007
Posts: 664


Character Oni
  Rank: 3 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Thief
  Element:  Earth
  Alignment:  Neutral

3146 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I didn't see that, you made that just before I made my post. Sorry about that.
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tinnie



Joined: 01 Oct 2007
Posts: 249
Location: U.K

Character tinnie
  Rank: 2 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Barbare
  Element:  Earth
  Alignment:  Neutral

4 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

blue could u send it to me? so i could use my skills to see how i vouch against u Smile
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Beirgo



Joined: 01 Nov 2007
Posts: 174
Location: Des Moines IA

Character Mr.Twinkie
  Rank: 5 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Holy
  Alignment:  Neutral

527 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you also need a version with the gate closed.
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Sim
Site Admin


Joined: 02 Sep 2007
Posts: 386
Location: baltimore

Character Psychotomus
  Rank: 47 of 131
  Level: 1

Characteristics:
  Class:  Bard
  Element:  Water
  Alignment:  Neutral

7786 Points

PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beirgo wrote:
you also need a version with the gate closed.


No, just the gate, we can just render it in front of t he shop =)
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